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©2009 *kururu-pon
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This is a commission for =Starbat sorry ;A: pony tails aren't my forte...

Thank you so much for commissioning me ^^ I really hope it is accurate and that you like it <3

Also thank you for supporting me for all this time <3

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Yuradell + Tera is © to =Starbat
art is © Me

Critiques


:iconvampiretrees:
Great emotion in this pic but there is some stuff structurally wrong.

First of all their ears need to be a bit bigger and the shape should either be more rounded or more defined and pointed [If they were supposed to be pointed.]

The green girl's extended arm is a little bit wrong, it's a little too short. Also, you should have it bend a little to make it more casual and realistic.

Small note on the redhead's feathers, the one farther away should be behind her head for a more realistic effect. Likewise, the green haired girl's ponytail should be a tiny bit more rounded at the top.
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:iconscythedancer:
I like their expressions and colors in this pic:) Also I think those ponytails are very well done^^
:iconnathangreenx:
Woah this is awesome!

Your colouring continues to inspire me, and your lineart is just so clean! Curse you and your skill!

Good work :)

<3
:iconessa-ybz:
awesome ^^

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:iconstarbat:
Lovely. You captured all the details. ^^

Thanks so much. Really great work.

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Do not walk ahead of me for I may not follow,
Do not walk next to me either,
In fact, just leave me alone!
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:iconsantheas:
Beautiful job, Kuru!

I love the girl in green. (she has my intended haircut) o3o I like her pendant especially, it just grabs my eye right away. (What am I, a magpie? >>; )

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:iconbloodroseangel:
The expressions are great in this and I like the detail in the green-haired girl's necklace. ^^ But I agree with the person critiquing, her arm definitely should be a little longer. The redhead's jawline is drawn really well. =)

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"So how do I know if it's chosen me?"
"It will try to kill you."
"... Outstanding."
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:iconmodern-swinger:
why ? D:
you did a good job on them D:

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:iconkururu-pon:
lol THANKS IKKI <3333 PICS OR IT DIDN'T HAPPEN KTHNX. hufufufu -dangles a bunch of shiny objects in your face-
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Well, I'm getting my hair cut tomrrow. It'll be Alto Saotome's haircut from Macross Frontier, which is fairly similar.

o3o Ooooh~ SHINIES! *grabbyhands at*@3@

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