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commission for ~StarAngel280
Woo ;A; Biggest Pic I've done....ever? in a while? not sure...But it was surprisingly fun despite having a background :3 The light source is strange..Because the light would be coming from behind..but I still wanted their faces to be shaded normally...So please bear with that ;A;... I'll just go with... -multi sources of light- ROFL -shot- I hope I portrayed this accurately to your description and thankyou for commissioning me ^^ ++ sai + photoshop Refs used for pose and roses Memori © ~StarAngel280 Kyoya Hibari © Akira Amano Comments HELL YEAH GLOWING FLOWERS.
nice colors, man i wish i could do things like that in sai =/ -- ......  Hibariiii! XDDD Ah, it's so cute!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 You should draw more KHR stuff.
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-- At heart, authors are terrible people. Copy and paste this into your signature if you agree. -- Only true authors will defile their own canon for the lulz. -- Obsessed with Yu-Gi-Oh! and 07-Ghost right now. As well as "Percussion Gun" and Gackt. -- Thnx lavs. YOU CAN IF YOU BELIEVE FFFF
 aww it pretty wouldnt it be nice if you were in love and you were in a place like that ^^
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pshhh screw the light source SCREW ALL LIGHT SOURCES! there's a blinding light in their face, didn't you know that? :3 i love her eyes, and the fluffy chick frick i might eat that it's a fuzz ball of cuteness oh and the roses on the sides and corners? exquisite. you did a really good job. can't wait for more updates!!!  lol I want to draw more KHR stuff ;A: I just have alot on my plate -cries-
it would ;A: very romantic~
LOL thankyouuu XD I DO KNOW THAT NOW. or rather...it seemed like it when shading OTL but ah XD
uh huh, white blinding light is coming off of the petals and flowers XD
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Critiques
But as for crits I'd do my best. Personally I think there shouldn't be a clear solid horizon line for the background when you've gone for a more soft type look, plus it seems that the light is on a layer behind the line. That's all I can think of for the background so moving on to the characters.
The girl's elbow looks a little too small and the way the straps on it is drawn is giving a weird sense of the volume in her arm.
The placement on her nose also a little off put and to me makes her face seem a little flat, I think you encounter this quite a lot so I'm never sure if I should just think that it's your style or try and get you to make the nose seem like it actually pops out of the face.
Hibari looks so awesome I can't really find anything wrong with it- oh well maybe his hand looks a little strange due to the way you lined the fingers, especially his pinky. It almost seems like his ring finger is overlapping the pinky which from that angle should not be happening.
But anyways... yes overall I really like this piece and those white roses are so goregous and I would like to eat Hibari's little bird. Awesome work Kuru : D
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